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《南乡子·泪咽却无声》 纳兰性德

南乡子-为忘妇题照
	泪咽却无声,只向从前悔薄情。
	凭仗丹青重省识,盈盈。
	一片伤心画不成。

	别语忒分明,午夜鹣鹣梦早醒。
	卿自早醒侬自梦,更更。
	泣尽风檐夜雨铃。
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《南乡子》


泪咽却无声,
Tears coming down and I choke but I don't utter any sound.

只向从前悔薄情。
I only have deep sense of remorse for my earlier neglects.

凭仗丹青重省识,
I depend on my painting brushes to regain my memories,

盈盈。
of this graceful lady.

一片伤心画不成。
However the piece of heart-broken feeling can never be painted.

别语忒分明,
The farewell biddings are too distinct,

午夜鹣鹣梦早醒。
Midnight dreams of love birds disturb my sleep.

卿自早醒侬自梦,
You go wake up early by yourself and I keep on dreaming by myself,

更更。
night after night.

泣尽风檐夜雨铃。
Wind blows, rain falls, I cry to my exhaustion in the night under the eaves and the sound of chariot jingles.


简介: 纳兰在午夜里想起了亡妻,想凭画像来记起亡妻,但是换来得只是永远的伤心。

别语忒分明:思念卢氏,念及她对自己的温柔体贴,病体沉沉时尚不忘嘱咐自己千事万事,这些话事后想起来就会特别地分明





注释: 咽yè: 阻塞 fill,choke 却: but, on the other hand 向: toward 从前: past 悔: regret,have remorse (regret是悔恨做错或没做但没有良心自责。remorse有良心自责。regret 可以是动词或名词,remorse只是名词) 薄情: [lit]thin feelings; [*]heartless 凭仗: depend upon 丹青: [lit]red and blue;[*]painting brush 重chóng: again 省视: 忆起,记住, memorize,[*]recall,remember 盈盈: limpid,good manners,graceful 形容举止、仪态美好。可理解为所爱女子 [*]graceful lady。 一片: a piece,a slice(of bread),a stretch (of land),a sheet (of water),a scene of 伤心: heart-broken 不成: cannot do it 别语: farewell biddings,words during parting 忒tè: too 分明: 清晰 clear,distinct 鹣jiān: 比翼鸟,a kind of love bird in ancient lore 鹣鹣: a pair of love birds 卿qīng: high official, you (intimate term) 侬nóng: 可以是“你”也可以当“我”。you, or I(Chinese is intriguing, isn't it?:) [*]I,me 更: [lit]change,renew; [*]night 更更: 即过了一更又一更。night after night 檐yán: eaves 泣: weep 尽: end,used up,all gone,[*]exhausted 风檐: windy eaves 雨铃:雨霖铃,雨中闻铃声 sound of jingles of chariots in rain
(***主词动词及时态分析尚未完成!) 逐字字面中翻英(literal translation) 及主词动词时态: 泪/咽/却/无/声, tears/choke/but/no/sound 只/向/从前/悔/薄情。 (I)only/toward/past/have remorse/(my)heartless 凭仗/丹青/重/省识 (I)depend on/painting brushes/again/to recall 盈盈 graceful(lady) 一片/伤心/画/不成。 a piece of/heartbroken Feeling/paint/cannot be done 别/语/忒/分明, farewell/words/too/distinct 午夜/鹣鹣/梦/早/醒。 midnight/love birds/dreams/early/wake up 卿/自/早/醒/侬/自/梦 you/self/early/wake up/I/self/dreaming 更更 night after night 泣/尽/风/檐/夜/雨/铃。 (I)wept/exhausted/wind/eaves/night/rain/chariot jingles.

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